USERNAME
NC shits on you, nobody calls this man the greatest
Now everyone can see Jay get wasted like San Andreas
Throwaway bar for an opener?
We’re not alike, I write verses for my legions of fans
You write ‘Verzuz!’ in comments while Swizz streams on the ‘Gram
Ehhhh
Jay stay dropping trash, but I think he may be high
I drop, & Fresh shit gettin’ wiped like Zuch when his baby cries
More cocky than harsh. I'm lookin for a hit
All this rapport’s a bore, house is outfitted with poor décor
Police don’t need a ‘no knock’ for a guy who can’t afford a door
Funny
Culture said I had kids? A possibility whenever I fuck whores
But I’m calling Jay’s girl, I’m curious what I gave her 300 bucks for?
Kinda funny
Next time I’m bringing a hanger, cuz lately hoes are slippin’
& that pussy’s getting The Wire On Demand like HBO subscriptions
Cool wp, avg bar
I been fucking your aunt, and I’m diggin’ her thunder thighs
We had a 3 way, nutted, and I left some kids on your mother's side
Basic
Regardless, this is a hassle, I’m trying to write shit an skedaddle
Goodbye JaysonFresh, Signed UserNameWinningThisBattle
Throwaway for the closer too?
Mannn either you aint gaf about this battle, or this guy must really suck. Probably the worst verse I've seen from you, out of all 5-6 of them. Door & 300 bucks were only bars that resonated, the rest seemed keyed.
5/10
VS
JAYSONFRESH
User desperately tryna revive career, why bother?
u gon dieeee anyway. ya life a car breathalyzer theres 'no .2 it for starters'
I see what you were trying, and I like, but it didn't work quite right
YOUR corny jokes hav us like wtf. User done? He should just stop
last week u showed an Answer.. then got hit with Culture shock
Below avg "you lost to ___ last week" bar
let vultures flock. doughboy aint got stamina to pause
save my gun bars for next week, nigga u already close to dieing of natural cause
Meh
& those hunger pains'll eliminate u before any challenger
his stomach 'always grumbling' Karens use it to speak with the store manager
Ehhh... nah. Not feeling where you went with it
I’ll fuckin stage ya death a suicide, make that the scene
Have u Layed out, tool in ya mouth.. that’s a Cpap machine.
Too basic
& Fresh got that formula to win, wanna know how I'll rock?
exceed max number of log ins. look ANYONE can put Username on lock
Cool concept. Reworded could've been lotb
soo what'll kill him firrrrst. is it Fresh or his cholesterol
experts say with proper masking, COVID a struggle to catch.. so is User ina Trust Fall
Said a lot in the punch just to get to a soft punchline. Couldve done more with this
& ur bout 2 inhaler puffs away from a lung collapse
this kinda beat down'll need sraL's coconut oil to get Users health back on track.
Meh
Take out the filler, reword struggle to catch & on lock and you might've won this. As it stands, i didn't like much other than those two. The opener was honorable mention. 4/10
All this rapport’s a bore, house is outfitted with poor décor
Police don’t need a ‘no knock’ for a guy who can’t afford a door
VS
& Fresh got that formula to win, wanna know how I'll rock?
exceed max number of log ins. look ANYONE can put Username on lock
Weirdly close, subpar battle, lots of misses.
Vote: User
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