SCOUT
I just saw the bronze bomber tuned up by some gypsy ..
Deontay's tests have been huge...3 buffets, 2 food trucks in 1 sitting
Just saw? Lil late but kinda funny. Shitty rhyme though
Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run...
It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one
I lol'd
Bet the thought of my shank inside your skull is pretty stressful..
Blade swarming. Mormon skateboarding..I'll shove-It in ya temple
Wasn't feelin this one
They call me barc like they know me. It's totally strange
If I'm selling wolf tickets, your whole act is a coyote with mange
Decent, points for the creativity
I copped a big chain for 13g. To mimic, you need green first
If U rock a big chain, burger king has been giving you free t shirts
Its.... ok...
Can't hide 400 lbs. so this is a body that I'm NOT covering up
If ya untraceable, it's because a whole pack of chalk wasn't enough
Better than the last bar
Never at large. Just large... Claim to be hard but you off the $
Your last mugshot was a mix of ketchup, barbeque sauce and honey
I lol'd again
Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister
You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner
Probably my fav bar so far but it's starting to feel like everything a fat joke
Got thumbnails of ya wife going down, it's how I treat my phone
Ur thumbnails include batter & bits of brownie downed a week ago
Too similar to the mugshot bar. You prolly wrote them at the same time huh
I'm exposing bowels when bullets collide with that ass, kid
Irony'll be shitting out shards before you're put in a fiberglass casket
So-so closer
You shoulda went 12. Shoot the foot, wolf tickets, mugshot, pay attention were good. The fat jokes eventually got repetitive, and I wasn't really feeling the others. Solid showing though, I don't lol a lot.
7/10
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HDVM
Kids another alias tryna spar w/ a great..
Thought you were cro/bar so I'm using 1 to pry ur jaw off ya face..
Not my preferred type of bar. Almost a throwaway
I don't just walk into battles w/o scoping around..
I Use the choppa to 'Scout the landscape' by leaving you in pieces all over the ground..
High quality gun bar. Shoulda been the opener
Funny U asked for this match... I'll leave ya faculty bothered..
..Zuch set you up for failure worse than a drunk mom & absentee father..
'your drunk ___' instead of 'a drunk ___' woulda made it harsher. More braggadocio than a diss without it
& Even ur chick is telling you man up..
Said I'm better by 'leaps & bounds' then jumped in my bed w the handcuffs..
Avg 'fucked your girl' bar
See I was tryna hit w minimal time spent..
My dick had maaad interest & her camel toe sealed the deal w that 'fine print'..
Swaggy but not a harsh diss
My niggas Rollin 60 Crip & imbeded in the streets..
If you rollin 60 its like Zuch vs Blue except no1s EVER gonna read..
Ok
So how you figure you maneuvering enough to test me G?..
One uppercut'll 'send Scout South' like he's recruiting for the SEC..
Basic but ok
U & ur boys ain't nowhere near a thugs route..
Ur a goofy & them niggas rats like the Mickey Mouse Clubhouse..
Its like you're keyin at this point
Ya prose so trash w no flow and swag..
How tf you up the ante Scout just to fold so fast ?..
Definitely keyin
Get checked for disrespect when the heats on aim..
Shots'll make you stay in ur lane w holes in ya top like a skeeball game..
Creative, but not as good of a gun bar as your other one
I feel it's clear you put some effort in the first half of your verse- it's leaps and bounds better than the second half in terms of quality. Spittin your shit out loud its fire, sounds dope to a beat n shit. But when i analyzed it bar for bar, it's well written, but it didn't truly attack dude like what I'm looking for, conceptually. Specifically the opener, leaps & bounds, fine print, and the last couple bars.
6/10
Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run...
It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one
Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister
You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner
VS
I don't just walk into battles w/o scoping around..
I Use the choppa to 'Scout the landscape' by leaving you in pieces all over the ground..
Vote: Scout
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