[Johnny 6 feet]

Objective- You brought an emotional and poetic take on the topic. You really gave us a sense of the characters personality and the issues she was going through in a way that carefully built up during the piece. The flow never dropped off and your rhyme scheme remained solid throughout. Good job.

Universe- Twists and turns in this lengthily narrative which held my attention from start to finish. The sense of karma coming back around in this with every chapter is a classic idea and you held it together with a great flow and well chosen vocabulary. Gotta enjoy a good horror influenced story.

Vote- Universe, I thought he took it in topic choice and flow. Great work gents.