[Master Rock]

Candy, had an interesting take, I had to read through it twice. But the story of the topic wasn't apparent, it seemed like a look back at your generational history but I nothing really stood out to me accept for this line, "our pockets filled with the truths of ancient cries" but then the next line you added diaries and I just could not get that to flow. As for your ending it related to the picture but I am not sure if it was suppose to be comedic or its possible that I just didn't get it.

As for Hush, this was a much better topical verse then the last one I recalled you did and you utilize this topic nicely. You opener wasn't to strong but then you grasp me on the second line combining it into the rest of the verse. The story and the background of one being abuse and troubled seems like a a glimpse into the psyche of this individual and the reasoning and approach to their mindset. Well written, nice wording, solid story, and poetic.

Nice job, Mr. Battler.

Candy madd props on showing up.

Giving it to Hush.