[Destroyer]

Godamamit Mac I told you to send me your verse
You are getting a lot better and just need a little tightening up on the wording and the harshness because your concepts are there. 100%. I really really just am not a fan of “scout’s” style. I see what works. There’s significantly more effort being made at making the wordplays go both ways. To me though, just working, isn’t enough for a wordplay punch to wow me. And that’s all I’m getting out of the wordplay punches here. Still enough happening to barely eke out a win over Mac

V/“scout”