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Old 11-15-2020, 08:22 AM   #15
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Fraze -

No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge

Frac -

Stop tryin im godly. Dont rhyme about shottys
You only know about barrels because I know bout hiding a body
Blow for blow ill have ur liver curdled
My sniping skills is That 70s show. Got u smoking out ur inner circle
I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned
This was easy. Ur effort was wasted
Im 1-0. Moving ahead.. But ur bodies gonna be at a separate location

Frac did his fucking thing here. Inner circle, LOTB. Ric flair was hilarious, opener and closer were dope. You've got a way of wording that's minimalist but gets to the point, says the most but uses the least amount of words to do so. I enjoyed it.

Fraze, old ideas killed you. Your wording is actually pretty damn good, but the concepts themselves kill you dead from jump. I haven't seen a diss a peer line since like, longbar writers in 02. Still, I think with a little updating you could do well here - just freshen the concepts up a bit.

V - Frac
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