Netcees - View Single Post - WEEK 6: Dave 3-2 VS Adverse 3-2 DAVE WINS

Ajax · 11-13-2020, 02:23 PM

Cool, close battle. Dave’s Bennie Hill line is something I’d write... gotta love the catering to the elderly. Thought Adverse’s world of Warcraft line was funny and direct.

Frankly, I think the concepts here were probably too close to call. But, Dave’s wording is more concise, which I think is really important. Adverse has solid concepts, but can let the wording get away from him at times.

So, Dave wins. In a close, entertaining read.

11-13-2020, 02:23 PM	#10
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	Cool, close battle. Dave’s Bennie Hill line is something I’d write... gotta love the catering to the elderly. Thought Adverse’s world of Warcraft line was funny and direct. Frankly, I think the concepts here were probably too close to call. But, Dave’s wording is more concise, which I think is really important. Adverse has solid concepts, but can let the wording get away from him at times. So, Dave wins. In a close, entertaining read. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals