Zuch; I liked Sinacog, Barc, ESPY, two fingers, meth, Muff, Neighbor and rape. I thought you wasted a lot of opportunities in your set ups with builds that were irrelevant to the punch. Your style in this battle often de-emphasized wordplay and that approach made the bars feel more simple and direct insult wise. It worked the few times you hit him with some truthfully digs, but overall it took the edge off the severity of the punch. 60 lines is a lot to write and I got a sense there were some corners cut and watering down. This was a good verse, especially considering the length and limited time it took to get it up.
Blue; I liked facial feature, Corona, recycling, Silento, Crop top, 69, DMX, fake dad, dog legs, Lion King, Kleenex, Michael Bay, a gust and Hitler. Thought you utilized your set ups really well. They were generally tied to the punch and had a few relevantly worded multis, which I always enjoy seeing. I thought 'covers blown' was the line of the battle, but 'dog legs' and 'facial features' was close. The lines I didn't name directly I either didn't catch (red carpet?) or felt they were worded in a way that took away from the punch (if he was getting dick for days would other people be spending time in the 'hole'?). Overall this was consistent as shit considering the time and length. Good stuff.
On his tombstone I’ll give dude a bit of credit to start
“Here lies Blue Bayou, he did his style just a little better than Barc”
you’re simple as fuck man, i guarantee the hype’ll fade
got a Direct Approach that couldn’t Blow Up w/ the help of Michael Bay
These two lines encapsulate the contrast in styles that defined this battle and both of them are commenting on those styles. Blue was much more wordplay-centric, where as Zuch kept it simple and direct. Over 60 lines Blue's style seems to have a higher level of difficulty and makes it more impressive.
Vote - Blue
Last edited by dull boy; 11-13-2020 at 01:40 PM.
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