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Old 11-12-2020, 06:37 PM   #14
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Ajax

With me, every verse is insane…
While you leave crowds ‘less riveted’ than the Aviator’s personal plane.
I live a storied life; the intro’s where you chapter ends…
Try me, you’ll get snatched ‘out of thin air’ so fast you’ll contract the Bends.
Even on NC, you don’t have enough boys to win…
Everyone hates me and I’ll still beat you ‘ten fold’ like Destroyer’s chin.

Rivals quake when I talk… All time; I’m adjacent to Pac.
I make money ‘hand over fist.’ You throw all your paper on rock.
This bum’s an immaculate slob…
In the company of greatness… the closest you’ll ever come to having a job.

Nice verse
Pretty consistent, familiar style. I like it. Only a few misses
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Eviction

You failing the bar exam is Shakespeare, you might as well hide behind the closed curtains.
Because you're so worthless, why would you name yourself ajax, when you have no purpose.
Keanu Reeves, except he was too pussy to answer the door, he must have heard of me.
He’ll need surgery, you’ll see ajax dumped on the floor like I cleaned up a murder scene.

Being generous if we're taking wording real serious
Those ideas were good though. Prime had potential too

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