11-12-2020, 04:46 PM
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#13
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Louisville, KY
Posts: 972
Battle Record: 14-24
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ajax
With me, every verse is insane…
While you leave crowds ‘less riveted’ than the Aviator’s personal plane.
aight
I live a storied life; the intro’s where you chapter ends…
Try me, you’ll get snatched ‘out of thin air’ so fast you’ll contract the Bends.
ok
Even on NC, you don’t have enough boys to win…
Everyone hates me and I’ll still beat you ‘ten fold’ like Destroyer’s chin.
light
Against me, you’ll end like you caught a disease…
People from all ‘walks of life’ look down on you. After I hobble your knees.
meh
You started mediocre. Now, you’re forced into the back…
Bring your team of green scrubs. They’ll get dropped with an orderly attack.
ok
Rivals quake when I talk… All time; I’m adjacent to Pac.
I make money ‘hand over fist.’ You throw all your paper on rock.
this is nice, but would have it even harder with better setup
Step up. Get pounded to shit…
You’re in no mans land in this battle. While your girl’s surrounded by dick.
not feeling this
This bum’s an immaculate slob…
In the company of greatness… the closest you’ll ever come to having a job.
concept is cool but wording doesn't hit to me
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Eviction
You have limited skill, and try to mimic the real ur kidding yaself if u think that gimmick’ll kill.
U’re such a pussy bitch after u get waxed u can use that retainer on a fucking chemical peel
ok concept, doesn't hit hard as worded
Where the fuck did you go to school? And who would trust you with a prosecution?
Your defense is fucked on the corner, only clients are sluts that was convicted of prostitution.
aight
You being in the spotlight is corny, we should never see ur name next to the’ banner.
All cases end with u broke, that’s why u’ll always live in ya dad's house like stephanie tanner.
not feeling this
You failing the bar exam is Shakespeare, you might as well hide behind the closed curtains.
Because you're so worthless, why would you name yourself ajax, when you have no purpose.
don't get this
Keanu Reeves, except he was too pussy to answer the door, he must have heard of me.
He’ll need surgery, you’ll see ajax dumped on the floor like I cleaned up a murder scene.
ok concept, badly worded
You shouldn’t have to second guess what’s been instrumental, to your lack of respect.
must be carrying an ax, when I heard ur shit it felt like being stabbed in the back of the neck.
not for me
You should stay in your lane this motherfucker has a checkered past tryna play a chess game.
Posting after me is your best aim. It doesn’t mean ur prime if you're delivering shit the next day.
nice concept w. prime but doesn't hit
After the punches send u to the hospital u’ll sue me for battery, why did you even agree to fight.
have u seeking medication but no amount of melatonin can help a crooked lawyer sleep at night
this rhymes but i don't see a punch
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Ajax had the more consistent verse. Like the opener and hand over fist. There were also a couple others that were quotable or close to it.
I don't have a lot of quotables from Eviction but I did like a lot of the concepts you came up with. If you had sharper wording and working on your punchlines this would have been a much closer battle.
Vote: Ajax
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