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Old 11-11-2020, 12:15 PM   #12
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Cool little battle. Props on opening it up with the pics.

Des’ “peace with that” and downslide lines were solid.. I didn’t really feel the rest of the verse was particularly hard hitting. There were some cleverish pic references, but none that stood out as great disses to me (pointy knees, etc). The overall wording was a little awkward too... especially in contrast to Orc’s. Even when the concepts aren’t amazing or unique, Orc’s wording and flow is top notch. It just reads really smoothly. And, I think his disses here were just overall better. Open shirt, racist pic, fuzz, were all jokes. Top to bottom, it was a better verse.

Orc wins. Entertaining read.
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