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Old 11-11-2020, 04:51 AM   #14
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Opener is more of an insult to Zuch but I liked it because nobodies been there yet
Fire drill was cool
Mission impossible was a miss to me
Drop is ok
Could’ve done more with contraband, wasn’t overly feeling
Rushmore is cool
Movie phone etiquette was cool at first read but actually could’ve had better wording
Wasn’t feeling the closer

Even though I didn’t get a load of quotables from this I really dig your style. Solid verse. Culture’s clearly an alias.. I feel like I’m reading someone else’s style that I’ve read before.. hmm

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Opener solid although a little corny
Culture was cool
Blame Zuch personal wasn’t great to me. Didn’t really say anything clever
Echolocation is ok
Ethically sourced missed for me
Off the cuff ok
I like the idea of African studies bar but hang bits of him from the ceiling? Really? Idk..
Small fry was too simple

I’ve got to give the nod to culture here. User again came solid with the wording but the closer and opener just came off a bit bland and corny to me. You probably had similar quotes but I liked cultures style more.

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