This was a pretty good read. It deserves an explained bar breakdown so I'll reward it with that.
Bar 1: I dug how User used used a play on what Culture posted about dinner time but the punch just bigged himself up rather than hurt Culture's feelings. On the otherhand Culture's bar was abetter and was a personal that did hurt User by saying/alleging he has fradulent votes. It was strong just wish it was a stronger shot at User instead of being more a shot at Zuch than anything.
Bar 2: Culture's jab was hot and kind of fresh with the fire drill wordplay but it was just a braggadocio line with a fictional personal which I don't care for. But it was fresh enough to beat User's who's bar was just too bland and easy to think of.
Bar 3: Again with Culture I like the wordplay in the bar but I lean more towards personals that sting with succintness. And I think User did that here and took this bar.
Bar 4: User took it with a really fun bar that has an interesting play on using a bat as a weapon and the ability of the animal. Culture's bar was hardhitting but User was better because although one bar is an allegation and the other just a threat User's was more creative.
Bar 5: Same here as bar 4 but its the opposite as Culture was more creative this time and had the harder hitting bar.
Bar 6: Gruesome line from Culture! lol A fresh play on knifing a muthafucka but also contained nice connectivity by seamlessly incorporating the dead presidents in it. User I've seen the off the cuff line before so this one didnt have the punching power for me as your other decent ones did.
Bar 7:I think both lines were predicatable but Culture's was fresher in his wording and delivery. So Culture takes tbis one.
Bar 8: Culture wins this bar by a centimeter. I was not a fan of either closer and felt like yall both got kind of tired and shit at the end lol but yea Culture's was better due to a punch instead of merely name calling from User.
All in All, this battle was a good read for me. I hope it gets lots of votes because its deserving. Culture good job in nearly every punch but great wording! User you showed good creativity with the echolocation line but Culture showed it more often with multiple bars.
Vote = Culture
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