lol @ des.
Shredder, you gotta evolve bro. I'm with Orc tho, the Shape to Kill line was probably the least bad in there. Verse read like a super throwback for me lol.
Eviction -
Opener and Mcribs was okay. Your wording's a bit better than Shredder's, but conceptually you'll have to step it up a little to compete with the higher ranks.
V - Eviction
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