[Objective]

Enjoyed the content for sure, heartfelt shit. However, the execution could have been polished a bit more.

Example:
Atlas i have broken free, I adhere for a BETTER NAME||
Cos it's pointless gaining all them dimes and still move around like a man with a BATTERED FRAME||
^The idea and content is dope but the stretched line at the very end could probably have been shortened down A LOT with better wording, and that would have helped your flow tremendously as well.

Thanks for sharing & keep elevating your game. Don't think I've seen you around before. If you're new: welcome to NCs.