10-31-2020, 12:28 PM
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#15
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Punchline Prettyboy
Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 1,512
Battle Record: 7-0
Champed
- Fight Night 6
Rep Power: 53833780
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Zuch
John Hensley verse:
I wrote 2 verses for you, and the most amazing fact..
Is that u woulda got the L L off the top like I snatched your Kangol Hat.
I can dig this, two concepts going. relevant . good opener
You're already mad, thinkin you got the balls Henny has.
Mr. Freckles, I'll put more Red Dots on your chest than you already have.
this is way too simple bro. would have had to add another angle to this at the least.
Thinkin you're dope, but you're just lying instead.
Buggin, like the insect in the photo you're just Fly In Your Head.
yeah this is dope. everything worked perfect here
Wrestle with the idea but I already won in the scripture.
Think I'm on the ropes til I hit you with a more beautiful backdrop than the 1 in your picture.
this is fire to me
You're not Godly, just fodder, I dunno why I honestly bothered.
My verse made you cry so many tears it created those 2 bodies of water.
nah man, this is simple. so simple its kinda cringe worthy. this should have never made it into the verse
Trust me it ain't rude when I say you ain't fuckin w/ me dude.
It won't be that Camelback, when you're in the hospital Suckin on a Tube.
this is one of those lines where I get it, but it just isnt good to me
You used to be good, but now you can just tell that's a myth.
But it's like you stumbled backwards, because your style Fell off a Cliff.
huh? this isnt it bro
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Zuch
Orc verse:
In high-school you was the man. The fuck happened to you?!
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We r not comparable. Lemme explain the differences bud:
I beat every last member of DOHpe. & U ended up addicted to drugs
nice. good opener
You get no TV time & do the dishes so quick
Dog, pls ...U been ‘under the thumb’ wayyyy before this pic was posted
this is dope. nice ammo use
Yikes. What a stupiddd body type
With a physique so Fluffy it’d make Gabriel Iglesias sue for copyright
eh, this is like ok but its just there
THE GOAT. U couldn’t box ina round with me
The talk is in doubt swiftly; looking like Silent Bob’s cousin Obnoxiously Loud Ricky
lol not nah
My style is Progressive. I’m the type to do bits
Your idea of Campaigning for Change is “please, bro. I got a wife & two kids”
this is a cool flip. works wit the pic
Good job, buddy. You win that shit in a bet!?
This kid is inept — looking like uh-oh just got that Stimulus check.
Hate these kinda lines
Growth game soft & u always been a lame benevolent
Beard got soo many Patches it could help revolutionise Game Development
this is aight. feels lazy.
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this was way closer than I thought it was going to be. Hens suprised me an had some fire. really hit hard when it landed. the misses tho. verse editing was an issue here. Orc matched the fire equally and just missed less. or missed closer to the target. I loved this battle for how close it was, but I wanted to see some meaner stuff said. Still I enjoyed the competition level here
props to both. kudos to Hens for hanging in there
vote Orc
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