Hens -
You're already mad, thinkin you got the balls Henny has.
Mr. Freckles, I'll put more Red Dots on your chest than you already have.
Wrestle with the idea but I already won in the scripture.
Think I'm on the ropes til I hit you with a more beautiful backdrop than the 1 in your picture.
Two strongest lines, imo. Camelback was cool, fell off a cliff was cool, just hit a little light to me. Nothing technically wrong with your verse at all, you've definitely still got the skill - wording needs a litle touch up in places, maybe dig a little deeper on the concepts - but a cool verse bro.
Orc -
We r not comparable. Lemme explain the differences bud:
I beat every last member of DOHpe. & U ended up addicted to drugs
My style is Progressive. I’m the type to do bits
Your idea of Campaigning for Change is “please, bro. I got a wife & two kids”
Good job, buddy. You win that shit in a bet!?
This kid is inept — looking like uh-oh just got that Stimulus check.
solid little verse as well, not the best I've seen you come but the Dohpe line and campaigning for change lines were both well executed. The stimulus check line was straight jokes, i enjoyed that as well.
Tough call, I think John kinda rode the median here, everything in his verse was pretty much "decent", where Orc did the same, but his verse had higher highs, if that makes sense.
V - Orc
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