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Old 10-30-2020, 03:26 PM   #7
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Baby teeth cool.. simple but wording makes it all the more smooth
British slang solid
Unsheathing swords dope imagery, very creative
Fast man / champ match could be better rhyming to me but it’s a cool personal
Closer was ehh and I only didn’t quote the others due to em going over my head. Sorry.

Really enjoyed the verse

Dave

The first three lines were cool but a bit strange to do something that long winded.. guess it worked though
Door dash ok
Moving parts fire
Layers simple but worded well enough to be solid
Intersections cool
Concentration curls creative enough for a fat joke cool
BMI dip cool

Ohh shit this is a tough one. Users wording is so smooth which makes everything hit harder
and I was pretty confident his verse would win before I read Dave’s and then BAM Dave drops a fair few heaters... gotta come back
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