jayfresh
first bar was corny to me, second bar first line was cool but it lead to no where, your other bars was more bragging than punching, and a lot of horrorcore type bars, try to be more creative with your punches.
inf
the american pie reference in first bar was smooth, first to deliver was cool, recipe in a box was dope... made it on been undeserved was killer.
vote/Inf
I got inf taking this due to landing better punches.
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