spaz:
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
Really was your strongest bar to me, showcased the creativity and you dissed him. Your opener, it was cool from a rhyming standpoint, but its very statement-ish. you didnt actually hit him with anything. Twister was cool, not maybe fully quote-worthy, because I've seen a variation of it, but it was a solid jab. Mermaid line was kinda the weakest of the bunch, the multi to the rhyme was off and the concept in general fell a bit flat. Closer was ok, a step slightly above the opener. You've got some good pieces here, conceptually, nothing here was flat out bad... just have to put everything together a bit better next time.
blue:
yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you
Opener was full of swag, faggot line was funny, closer was fire.
Well done gentlemen, this was a good read.
V - Blue
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