10-23-2020, 02:32 PM
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#8
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Punchline Prettyboy
Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 1,512
Battle Record: 7-0
Champed
- Fight Night 6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ajax
They say you’re one of Netcees' best…
but, to me…
You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that…
The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback.
....this falls flat for me. yeah its clever but its really not impactful and the execution is long winded
This is a showdown between your BB gun and my wicked .44…
I rock arenas; This goblin couldn’t ‘bring the house down’ selling pillows door-to-door.
....I truly dont get this.. I like how you "bring the house down" in quotes to help us understand whats going on here. but yeah. so hes selling pillows that I get. do u mean like a down banket? yeah this is either going over my head or its ass. I imagine its ass
So, when I get done KO’ing this wack clone,
The crowd’ll be ‘unable to keep a straight face’ like a sumo free-soloing Half Dome.
lmao bro wtf are u talking about
For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill;
For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill.
...ok this is my fav one so far. sometimes less is more
You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon…
I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun.
...cool multi bro . more punch next time
You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line….
You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find.
...hmm. was there a third ace ventura? i remember the finkle einhorn case and then the african thing with marrying the chick..iunno bro i didnt see the one wit the snow flake
I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace…
SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face.
this is pretty cool I like the setup. wp I like to. its good man could have been crazy but again, dig this for the most part
It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker…
This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers.
the term wig weaver is just weird bro. I doubt those two words have ever been typed back to back prior to this verse. the idea is crazy creative and I like it. but its one of those things are just are borderline cringe cuz its awk as hell
Good luck.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Zuch
ORC VERSE
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Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal
Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?”
lol cool.
I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro
Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe
not gonna pretend im familiar with this, also not going to google it. lets count this as a miss
Middle-aged UPN battlers ain’t got shit for me
Yikes. Dreamt of being Attorney General & finally won one in ur mid 40s
this is heavy. lotb
I get voters miss some bars but you should write less
Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left
dope idea, but unless his wife really left him the payoff on this is anticlimactic at best
A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud
It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud
ok so im starting to think this angle is true iunno.. stilll this is eh at best for me
Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb
His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib
I kinda get half of this sorta almost. cuz I know who Khab is an I assume Chi is another fighter. shrug
The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend
Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10”
thats cool
I’ll b 5 up in votes. That’s how easy this shit is
I saw you were wack right away. No way you’re Leading the Witness
I wish u let up on the law angle at some point cuz im bored of it by this ppoint
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Ajax has some really creative shit but a dry delivery hurt him here. Orc landed 2 heavy haymakers which made this an easy call for me.
vote Orc.
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You ain’t a young buck ... yous a dumb fuck//run up and get gun butted.. get all your gums bust
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