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Universe · 10-21-2020, 06:48 AM

INF:

"I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey"

- Gun bar excused for the creativity of this.

"U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low"

evaD:

"Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw"

- Very nice.

"Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?"

- Great closer.

Good battle here between two guys who definitely bring it. INF is solid all around, not many weaknesses but nothing too mind bending either. evaD started kind of slow with some played concepts (going down in history like Monica Lewinsky is a bar I read in 2003-2004 - and that was even done better) but finished really strong with two clever bars that I loved.

Vote - evaD

10-21-2020, 06:48 AM	#9
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	INF: "I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey" - Gun bar excused for the creativity of this. "U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low" evaD: "Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw" - Very nice. "Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?" - Great closer. Good battle here between two guys who definitely bring it. INF is solid all around, not many weaknesses but nothing too mind bending either. evaD started kind of slow with some played concepts (going down in history like Monica Lewinsky is a bar I read in 2003-2004 - and that was even done better) but finished really strong with two clever bars that I loved. Vote - evaD __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..