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Universe · 10-21-2020, 06:23 AM

Ajax:

"You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that…
The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback."

- loved the multi's here.

"I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace…
SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face."

- Cool wordplay.

"It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker…
This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers"

Ajax, your rhymes are technically impeccable. Really a pleasure to read. Flow is butter. But some of your concepts are a little... stretched out for my taste. Far fetched and slightly convoluted at times. But you def have a polished tongue-in-cheek style that I enjoy. Your verse last week was amazing to read as well. Consider me a new fan.

Orc:

"Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal
Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?”"

"get voters miss some bars but you should write less
Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left"

- Yikes.

"Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb
His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib"

- ^^this is one of those rare bars where I'm like, "Fuck, I wish I thought of that..." I'm a huge Gaethje fan but now I'll never be able to hear Bruce Buffer announce his name without thinking of Gay Chi lol.

Great battle, fellas. Ajax is something unique and I enjoy reading his stuff but Orc, for me, is the more focused battler and always delivers personals that really sting. The guy is a champ for a reason...

Vote - Orc

10-21-2020, 06:23 AM	#7
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Ajax: "You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that… The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback." - loved the multi's here. "I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face." - Cool wordplay. "It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker… This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers" Ajax, your rhymes are technically impeccable. Really a pleasure to read. Flow is butter. But some of your concepts are a little... stretched out for my taste. Far fetched and slightly convoluted at times. But you def have a polished tongue-in-cheek style that I enjoy. Your verse last week was amazing to read as well. Consider me a new fan. Orc: "Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?”" "get voters miss some bars but you should write less Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left" - Yikes. "Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib" - ^^this is one of those rare bars where I'm like, "Fuck, I wish I thought of that..." I'm a huge Gaethje fan but now I'll never be able to hear Bruce Buffer announce his name without thinking of Gay Chi lol. Great battle, fellas. Ajax is something unique and I enjoy reading his stuff but Orc, for me, is the more focused battler and always delivers personals that really sting. The guy is a champ for a reason... Vote - Orc __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..