This was pretty tough, there are signs of a stirring giant in the making. You've got some patience to portray situations and feelings the way that you do, like this for instance:
Its an intricate notion,one idea or emotion that can instigate motion
A token of hoping;one drop against the weight of the infinite ocean
With an explosion; the ocean persists with potent waves, hits after hits
Soaking, frozen and broken, he drifts eying eloping from the fierceness that exists
^The gathering of ideas here is knitted together well. In a different way than the norm.
Keep doing you
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