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Old 06-18-2013, 11:12 PM   #3
Vulgar
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A well rounded piece with nice amounts of meat in the form of sentiments that can reverberate with the reader, taking them on a dissertational journey as they travel from line to line on the galactic (modernism is overrated) express. That Malthusian line was excellent, and for me the first stanza was the strongest of the verse. Overall, a complete drop and a respectable presentation about our alignment with the outer regions.

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