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Old 10-15-2020, 02:19 AM   #11
Universe
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User:

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The rest of the verse was good but nothing else stood out to me. Some general punches with some stretched/played concepts, I found. (ie. Two cents)


Sharp:

Dancing around
Roasts

The thing I like about Sharp is his personal attacks. He tailor-made this verse for User, and he did a great job with the punches within this box, never stepping outside it for the sake of a bar.

I got to award the less general, more opponent specific verse here.

Vote: Sharp
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