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Pharaohs Army · 10-15-2020, 12:12 AM

This reads more like an unpolished note when compared to some of your bangers. Few spots had rhyme droughts as well. Don't know if I'm a fan of the disjointed lines.

Don't take that the wrong way. You've got all the talent to make a better one.

10-15-2020, 12:12 AM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	This reads more like an unpolished note when compared to some of your bangers. Few spots had rhyme droughts as well. Don't know if I'm a fan of the disjointed lines. Don't take that the wrong way. You've got all the talent to make a better one.