Barc:
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
Cool verse, liked Goomba and the counter line. I'm just stating this here to be objective, but Barc, I honestly like your lines more when you drift away from the wordplay. That's just me though, I'm not a wordplay guy. You can write and you have some dope ideas in there and the execution on some is great...i usually wind up just reading the wordplay stuff as complete whiff's though. I say that, and then sometimes you wind up throwing out a crazy WP line i actually fuck with, so, it's whatever I guess lol
Hush:
u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
Hush kinda tapered off in the end for me, but went on a soliddddd run up until that point. the rocked to sleep line was hilarious, and a genuine laugh for me. Makes it about even in the quotes, but I think there was just a level of disrespect in hush's verse that made those lines pop more. It's a close battle, really glad this was a spotlight this week. Good show fellas.
V - Hush
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