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Originally Posted by Barcotic
Hush aka Victor
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
Ok, the wordplay is clever. I don’t love the rhyme with “boy is nothing” and I think the wording could be better.
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Ok, first “you’re short” punch. Don’t love it.
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
This is just ok, pretty simple to me
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
Is this supposed to be “convert a bull?” If so, it’s terrible. If not, I don’t get it
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
A super Mario punch? Gomba is Italian. I’m not seeing the connection
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
Petrol? Nah. You work for petrol? This is a punch in a battle rap?
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
Simple, light
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
No
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
On because like power and on/off switches? This is remedial, barc.
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Vs
u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
ok
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
Again, ok
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Light jab
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
Lmao. Brutal
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
Hits
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
Lol. Accurate
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
Ouch lotb
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
Nah
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
Not feeling
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Man, hush killed this. Barc, I want to like your shit, it’s like every bar is either too much or too little. I think you just think of a concept and immediately just run with it like Petrovic is a good example. Like I get why you thought of it. But then you wasted it on making it another “you’re short” punch. Like, Petrovic died in a car crash. You’re already using gasoline. Come on man. That’s not a large leap to a dying in a car/gasoline punch. He was even foreign and hush has the whole forine thing going. There’s A LOT you could do with that concept. Flesh them out more. ON/power ranked? Come on, bro. That’s some text concept 101 shit. You’re better than that.
V/hush