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Ajax · 10-13-2020, 02:32 PM

I'm not sure there's much need to critique here. Sin is obviously either a troll account or a very confused 13 year old Thai boy with access to way too much anime who speaks English as a fourth language.

So, its pretty clear that iSpaz won. I dug the internal rhyme schemes and the short, to the point, wording... I think it could have used some more wit/originality in the concepts (and I still think that having a whole verse of gun punches doesn't work well unless they are REALLY well executed), but it was a pretty entertaining little verse. So, cheers.

iSpaz wins.

10-13-2020, 02:32 PM	#14
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	I'm not sure there's much need to critique here. Sin is obviously either a troll account or a very confused 13 year old Thai boy with access to way too much anime who speaks English as a fourth language. So, its pretty clear that iSpaz won. I dug the internal rhyme schemes and the short, to the point, wording... I think it could have used some more wit/originality in the concepts (and I still think that having a whole verse of gun punches doesn't work well unless they are REALLY well executed), but it was a pretty entertaining little verse. So, cheers. iSpaz wins. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals