Netcees - View Single Post - WEEK 2: Mac 1-0 VS TOP iLL DRAGSTER 1-0 TOP ILL WINS

Universe · 10-13-2020, 08:39 AM

TOP iLL:

I’m the newest trend, watch me display this action
When people say your verse is the hottest garb, they ain’t talking bout the latest fashion

- good start.

You are a walking meme, and get irked about mentions
‘The Mac will spit’ alright, that’s the word around Craigslist

- haha childish but made me chuckle.

Thousands follow Top iLL, you’re a fruitcake bitch
You told us you had 4K Friends, but forgot to mention it’s on a Blu-Ray disc

- lol

Pull up, this right hand has a burning confession
One swing will have your face in such a purple state it could swing the election

- Nice but I wouldn't have used "swing" twice maybe?

Awkward at bars, so no girl wants to give you their info
If you ever end up in their room it will sound like Stone Cold’s intro

- hahahaha

I read your last battle, for real you’re the fuckin worst
I know I told you to pull no punches, but you Shoulda pulled at least 5 from that verse

- Great closer.

Mac:

TOP iLL.. aka ZUCH!

- News to me^^

what's up faggot, folks know you're behind this joke
the only diff is that both overdosed on different kind of coke

- I think this one went over my head..?

^ this dude is 80% flour.. 20% sugar, 100% real no fake
i got his blood boiling so long he shit a red velvet cake

- I mean, okay... Why velvet though?

yo body doesn't catch a break cuz that mouth's a trap
so much elevation ur stretch marks resemble a topographic map

- This didn't make sense with the set-up line but I liked it.

mayb a treasure map? and the fortune is dragster two
fact is like any treasure they'll need gps & a shovel to find you

- Not bad.

besides alias he's a biter too, dude shud rot in shame
you're an impostor among us & i'm not talkin bout the game

- No.

people wont remember ur name & don't care if ur present
IDK why u stay in the closet if ur whole family's are trans parents

- trans-parents is old and flow here was jagged.

I got TOP iLL taking this one easy. Mac, thanks for your insights last week on my verse but just wasn't feeling this one from you.

Vote - TOP iLL (Zuch)

10-13-2020, 08:39 AM	#10
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	TOP iLL: I’m the newest trend, watch me display this action When people say your verse is the hottest garb, they ain’t talking bout the latest fashion - good start. You are a walking meme, and get irked about mentions ‘The Mac will spit’ alright, that’s the word around Craigslist - haha childish but made me chuckle. Thousands follow Top iLL, you’re a fruitcake bitch You told us you had 4K Friends, but forgot to mention it’s on a Blu-Ray disc - lol Pull up, this right hand has a burning confession One swing will have your face in such a purple state it could swing the election - Nice but I wouldn't have used "swing" twice maybe? Awkward at bars, so no girl wants to give you their info If you ever end up in their room it will sound like Stone Cold’s intro - hahahaha I read your last battle, for real you’re the fuckin worst I know I told you to pull no punches, but you Shoulda pulled at least 5 from that verse - Great closer. Mac: TOP iLL.. aka ZUCH! - News to me^^ what's up faggot, folks know you're behind this joke the only diff is that both overdosed on different kind of coke - I think this one went over my head..? ^ this dude is 80% flour.. 20% sugar, 100% real no fake i got his blood boiling so long he shit a red velvet cake - I mean, okay... Why velvet though? yo body doesn't catch a break cuz that mouth's a trap so much elevation ur stretch marks resemble a topographic map - This didn't make sense with the set-up line but I liked it. mayb a treasure map? and the fortune is dragster two fact is like any treasure they'll need gps & a shovel to find you - Not bad. besides alias he's a biter too, dude shud rot in shame you're an impostor among us & i'm not talkin bout the game - No. people wont remember ur name & don't care if ur present IDK why u stay in the closet if ur whole family's are trans parents - trans-parents is old and flow here was jagged. I got TOP iLL taking this one easy. Mac, thanks for your insights last week on my verse but just wasn't feeling this one from you. Vote - TOP iLL (Zuch) __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..