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Old 10-13-2020, 08:15 AM   #7
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Barcotic:

I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee

- haha cool wordplay

He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up

- Ehh

Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant


- cool

So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist


- lol, like it. Kind of a general hit though, not too stinging.

Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level


- Dig the reference.

Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.


- Petro Vic... Damn.

Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one


- Filler, for you.

Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better

- Nice multi's, clever.

1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked


- Loved this closer.


Hush:

u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em

- personal hit, okay.

From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split

- Very nice.

It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get


- This was cool, nothing crazy though.

Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020


- Nah.

U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet


- Meh... too gun bar-ish for my taste.

That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay eve
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- lol.

“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep


- Haha... good flip.

& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on

- Oh man... I hate gun bars but that was creative af.

The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity


- Not feeling this closer.

GREAT battle between two of the best going right now. Both of you are witty and got punchlines for days... Hush had the better personal attacks and considering what he dropped in the never-to-be pic battle, this was super impressive... But I think Barc's flow really won it for me here. Everything was crafted to perfection and couple that with his wordplay/punchlines... It was JUST enough for the W, imo.

Vote - Barcotic
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