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Old 10-12-2020, 02:28 AM   #6
Adverse
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Craigslist was cool rhyme was kinda a stretch but I’ll overlook
Friends 4K was cool
Purple state was dope
Closer was cool

Mac had some decent ideas but seemed rushed
Red velvet cake was one of those
Treasure line was good, and also connected well
Everything else fell flat to me, had some good ideas that lacked execution, you’ve showed you’re elevating but here you seemed rushed and the verse suffered because of that

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