Johnny
Imagery: 10
Phrasing: 9
Story/Narrative: 7
Flow: 9
Tempo/Meter: 7
Rhymes/Multis: 8
"What comes next" appeal: 10
60/70
Ullr
Imagery: 9
Phrasing: 8
Story/Narrative: 7
Flow: 8
Tempo/Meter: 10
Rhymes/Multis: 10
"What comes next" appeal: 8
60/70
Both went in interestingly similar direction. Tied, so this is a pick'um-- to me.
As I type this I just know that Johnny's story resonated with me more, pulled me in more, hit me harder, however you wanna say it. Better descriptions and imagery.
But Ullr's story was better technically and had some good rhyme schemes.
Yes, and many more rhymes as I look at it yet again.
Quite a tough pick.
Ullr's is a great piece of writing which would win most weeks but Johnny's imagery and
Gasoline is the new gold...
Giga counters are the new phones
in the verse is really great.
Gonna go with Johnny by the slimmest of margins.
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