I enjoyed this short topic for what it is was, nice little original tale, noticed original tales is something you occasionally do and is such an underrated quality from a creative aspect so big up, rhythmic patterns, phrasing, flow all on point on here, no need to go into deets, kinda lost it at the end which felt rushed im guessing. However the last phrase was so fitting. Really dope and ties it all together perfectly imo, sums it the attitude of the character(s) you’ve developed and obviously applies to the topic at hand
good stuff, shame we didn’t get to see it in competitive form
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