[dead man]

yea nah not bad at all. especially out of a home studio unmixed

yours definitely worked way better as a song. your boy just be talking crazy over the beat for minutes but every now and then he stumbles on some dope shit

the "nobody lie, nobody lie" in your first verse was kinda weird. idk on a loop like this, it leaves enough space in the breaks so what you're actually saying matters more imo. it was cool as a sort of a re-introduction kind of track, felt like an "audio" rather than a "song" if that makes any sense. but it wasn't whack.

i gotta admit, it's impressive that you continue to make music, seek out artists and post work despite all the negative criticism you've received through the years not only as a person but as a musician. so just wanna put that out there. related note, i recently listened to some podcasts/interviews with Danny Brown and have been re-listening to his tapes and look, he didn't blow til his early 30's. look at griselda. Gibbs. this isn't to say you'll take off like that by any means lol but what the fuck who knows. the world is strange. and its a very cool thing to pursue what you like doing after the age people feel its conventional or "worth" doing, even in the face of all types of personal obstacles and harsh feedback. do you finny.