this seems a bit ill advised, to me. your strengths as a writer are completely gone in a piece like this and all of the critiques eng highlighted are brought to the fore. also, eng will never care about this. you're kind of playing yourself by taking a one off comment by him and asking for a pink slip then writing a lengthy diss verse in 2020. so it obviously bothered you quite a bit whereas eng said it and never thought about you again other than to troll. you automatically lose just due to power dymanics/level of care. don't get wrapped up in the negative feed. he, in his own way, was just reacting to your positive run in the GWL and outspoken personality, saying you hadn't risen to the level of writing your posting indicated. there was some cool wording in this but almost all of it was outside of punchline wordplay, such as it is for a topical head. I say move on.
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