06-05-2002
XCriticalX (
http://www.******.com/forums/vault/member.php?u=12587)
First to 5 votes, 3 in a row is a TKO=auto. win. no d/r, crew, or beef votes. And at least 1/2 explained votes. Yor verse is due by 12:00 2morrow or it's my win. (10-15 lines, max)
CRITICAL:
I'm husky, so it must~be why you can't touch~me/
And you couldn't get on top if you was born above~me/
Discreet ya straight weak, I was born in tha street/
Already in a group yet you been online less than week/
First you need to gain clout, your tha wackest noob out/
Cuz you couldn't spit flame if you had peppers in your mouth/
No need to shout cuz I'm ready for war/
Your groups posts combined an amount, of about, negitive 84/
I'm not done so don't~die, I promise I won't~try/
I'll just use my fist and put a ring around your whole~eye/
You can't spell Discreet with without tha Crit./
Please don't flip, It just sliped, did I get that shit all ova ya lip/
I got tha nice~lines wit some fine~rymes and your wifes~mine/
Cuz she gave me more brains then that niggah Albert Einstien/