Adverse: Liked your take on the topic, very smooth storytelling and the wordplay was on point throughout. Felt the story was a good angle and well played especially with the tempo that seemed at times relentless with imagery. Rhyme scheme was strong throughout though I felt your flow dropped at a few points or dragged out and missed in one or two places. Overall, a strong showing with good content and storytelling.
Inno: Very visceral take on the topic and I dig it. Felt the imagery was a little forced at times but overall good and kept on topic throughout. Felt it was also a little basic at times with the rhyme scheme and word choice in particular seeming rushed or quickly done where you could've gone deeper or picked a more impactful wording. Overall, a good verse that I felt missed in a few places and fell short in others but was pretty good nonetheless.
Vote: Adverse. Felt his take on the topic was a little more unique, a little stronger, with better word choice, better rhyme scheme. Good job, guys.
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