Netcees - View Single Post - Round One: Hush vs Ullr

Inno · 09-10-2020, 07:24 PM

Hush

Ok so Okay so this was pretty dope if I'm being honest At 1st it read a little chopping Butt Once the flow started To progress it got really good I gotta say I enjoyed The metaphors That you laid out Throughout the verse. You had a real poetic vibe going that worked well
I thought you did a fantastic job with the topic You hit every angle that the picture was trying to portray. Great stuff

Ullr

Good to see you back around.ok so I thought you wrote some pretty good stuff here.It was whimsical and easy to read. The Cadence was easy to follow which helped the story progress a bit smoother than your opponents. But if I'm being completely honest your verse lends its self more to the picture you provided rather than the actual topic. Unless I'm missing something?

Overall

I dug this battle it was definitely a pleasure to read both verses. I enjoyed what ullr brought to the table but I gotta be honest I'm digging what hush for it together.his verse used the entire picture while giving it some layers. Good shut I got hush

09-10-2020, 07:24 PM	#7
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Hush Ok so Okay so this was pretty dope if I'm being honest At 1st it read a little chopping Butt Once the flow started To progress it got really good I gotta say I enjoyed The metaphors That you laid out Throughout the verse. You had a real poetic vibe going that worked well I thought you did a fantastic job with the topic You hit every angle that the picture was trying to portray. Great stuff Ullr Good to see you back around.ok so I thought you wrote some pretty good stuff here.It was whimsical and easy to read. The Cadence was easy to follow which helped the story progress a bit smoother than your opponents. But if I'm being completely honest your verse lends its self more to the picture you provided rather than the actual topic. Unless I'm missing something? Overall I dug this battle it was definitely a pleasure to read both verses. I enjoyed what ullr brought to the table but I gotta be honest I'm digging what hush for it together.his verse used the entire picture while giving it some layers. Good shut I got hush Last edited by Inno; 09-10-2020 at 10:29 PM.