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Old 08-23-2020, 02:56 PM   #2
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Hey man I like the vibe here, and I understand you’re freestyling but I’m not really a fan of this type of hip hop unless it’s done originally or uniquely. You’ve proven yourself as a fantastic writer in the open mic section so if you take time, write a dope track and use this style to deliver it it’s going to be flames. You’ve got a decent voice and know your way around the instrumental good stuff
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