I find the rhymes slightly elementary some good ones like don't get your coat. Not elementary in necessarily a low education but kind of childish like you're in retirement while I'm improved. And death probably from meth. I suppose maybe I come from a life where it's unlikely anyone I know will die of meth. But maybe it's a more common concept in your walk of life so maybe that's all just relative. I am not saying it's garbage just that it's a mixture of decent and elementary to my mental understanding.
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