Hush -
I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
Cool section here, I really liked the wear your girls pussy out/button down idea - i dont think you spent enough time really fleshing it out, you made it into 2 lines when i think with tighter wording you could've done that whole idea in just the punch. Still, clever, and the uhoh/eddie line was comedy.
Des -
Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing
that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island
Des, you kinda had the issue I saw with Wand in some of this verse. Some of the 'punches' come off very statement-ish and it stifles the impact of any creativity you were going for. The salt and pepper line, for instance. However, beyond that - I really liked the sink line, really liked the haircut line, pours could've been harder, loved the idea, didn't really vibe with the execution - same as Hush's wear the pussy out line above. Easter Island was light, but comedy.
Overall, I feel like Des got this one, off the strength of one more quotable. I really like the sink line, I guess I'd consider that LOTB for me. Hush felt a bit rushed/lazy on his wording this week. I still dug a lot of his verse, which speaks to his skill.
Dope battle, but Des edged it to me.
V - Des
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