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Old 08-09-2020, 08:16 PM   #10
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Des -

a gator ain’t swallowing that whale. Look at the pudge on this fool
he so excited about the idea of ANYTHING eating he already leaving puddles of drool
Shark tat on a dark hat??? bro, say ur just lyin ta me
I knew u repped Cro, but I thought it was just of the “issant” variety
above his head - u can plug in ur phone so it charges up while u see the zoo
but that looks like a small outlet - like what you think every time u leave a room

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Only dynamite thing about this flick is the fact you got Napoleon witcha


Cool battle. Des is kinda the clear winner here for me. Des, really liked the stuff i quoted, the 70 stone line was good as well, but I've honestly had it used on me before.

Once again, Ad, you've got some decent ideas in that verse but your wording is really killing them sometimes. The D&D line for instance, nobody's actually saying "D&Ds" when referencing tits, so the comparison gets crushed under the weight (no pun) of the expectation of what that line could've been. Even slightly rewording it to "The only time double D's excite you nerds, there's an ampersand in the middle" would've worked slightly better. Opener was jokes though, i liked that.

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