[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Utmost

Since Seth didnt post it up, might as well drop urs
@Sharp Nine


Better hype ur mags, coz u'll be fuming mad when ya failures marked
since YOU gassed yaself up.. only to be let down the same way...elevator farts
kinda funny, but corny
Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"
good. LoL I had this exact same concept for my SC verse this week til I saw you beat me to it
Ura vet jockin, crew votin lame.. mid tier, puss for brains n' a plottin louse
I mean, thats such a crooked 5, Nine... Im expectin the rest of slaughterhouse
not bad. Like the concept. Set up was ehh - 'puss for brains' and 'plottin louse' didn't sound good
Last of a Dying Breed..Huh!? Ur booboo at best...top in text? IT ISNT!!!
s'like you butt buddies are outta toilet paper...d'way that Roll Call is so shit driven
punch/wp concept is cool but I think the wording wasn't the best
& itsa shame this timid mistake of life, aint takin a wife - Sharps gay, amirite?
Id say wait justa Cot pickin minute.. cept thats where YOUR sleepin when a chicks stayin the nite
Not bad. Again the wording is not the best
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Lot of decent concepts. Work on wording them to get the punch coming off harsher. Good job.


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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

G'luck

ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
good. original wp & personal. Didn't rhyme well for me but it's probably my accent
swerve merked your ass. god damn you blow, nerd
no chance a' gettin Pat down... u should browse some Al-queda employment brochures
like the personal/wp but how you flipped it was corny
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog
lol good. Dug the set up. Simple wp but came with a funny flip and harsh punch. Good bar
n ur homes a wreck. a shitty roof aint keepin you dry, scout
aint just fulla leaks... ur pads on the shortlist for Snowden's possible hideouts
Not bad current event concept
im beating you here. anythin different is BS, whore
no matter what ur gettin Second, Son... might as well order a PS4
dont get this

Getting good, keep it up :)


purely concepts-wise I'd edge it to Sharp but he easily had the better wording of the two. Not a total blow out but it's a clear winner to me


vote - Sharp