Medical weed couplet was dope, a few lines not to your usual standard and rhymed shit with shit a lot in the start before it picked up again on that department, not a biggie tho. A bit lackluster piece coming from you but I'd lie if I said I didn't think it was a cool read nonetheless and looking forward to the finished product. Stay up!
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