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Old 07-27-2020, 09:43 PM   #12
ACTIVATE SELF
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Master Rock
pretty cool verse. it rhyme fairly well. I can't say any one line in particular grabbed me or anything like that. But overall it was a cool ode to the artform. Decent stuff to be sure.

Exis
You seemed focused. Very choice and concise with the your words. Your imagery was on point, and I felt the emotion and flow were both stellar. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Good shit.
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