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Old 07-25-2020, 09:06 PM   #12
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j6f, "w day" lulz that was slick. word up this was a cool misdirection - well at least in the opening sequence anyway. really love your creativity man. and the concept you went with was so dope in relation to the topic. the weapon/relationship issue juxtaposition was so fuckin awesome. I really enjoyed this and the honest truth is i don't there was any weak spot.

master rock, for its length, this was pretty good my man. I don't think i've ever read any of your stuff before but its cool how thorough you dissected the topic. lots of grounds covered, which was impressive to me. definitely got the picture of drips and drains which i take it was the metaphor you were going for. pretty cool man.
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