[Universe]

Johnny 6 Feet - You're a very literal person aren't you? lol. You basically did exactly what the quote was hinting at... which isn't necessarily a good or bad thing... Just an observation. That aside, this was done very well. I liked the juxtaposition of war and getting ready to walk down the aisle... it's a massive cliche, but I enjoyed your take on it - ESPECIALLY the part where you described the female and how she psychologically breaks the man down... that was dope. Great flow throughout as well.

Highlights:

"Landmines lie in the dirt disguised as throwaway comments
Assassin blade tongue masked by smiles as bright as a comet
She first caught me in a pitfall; the depth of her eyes
Cyanide whispers carried on the breath on her lies"

- So good.


Master Rock - You know, if this was a fully fleshed out piece, it would've been pretty solid. But as it stands it's kind of an insult to put this short little verse up against Johnny imo. I liked it, but it wasn't enough content to be considered a viable threat. I liked this section though...

Highlights:

"Mirrors of our souls
reflect the wave of depth to where it flows
the breeze content, and it shows, when push comes to shove
the vise will cry from the dove, clasped by the embrace of what I'm made of"

- More of this and it would've been closer.

So overall a good little battle here, but it was pretty one sided in both scope, effort... and just plain polish.

Vote - J6F