[Hush]

Originally Posted by UserName

You write like the most sedated human, sat medicated droolin'
How's it feel to be the worst 'Verse on a site that's dedicated to them?
thats pretty dope. I typically hate. like half nameplays, or giving ppl nicknames to nameplay them, but this just fits. I almost called him Verse in the mag a few times. It dont feel forced so Im wit it
I asked Sharp what to write about him in the mag, he wrecked this queer
"Sharp: Just tell him he's improving; we've been doing that for seven years"
lol didnt notice how long adverse been here... this hit lol
AND you’re fat, Jesus, I wish that I could get this fella shot
Cuz you’re more about stealing seconds from your fam than Interstellars plot
this is tight. i get it, and never saw the movie. i imagine its some sort of time hiest .i know it involves stealing time. this hits.
You look like a dyke electrician who hasn't had a man in years
I told Hush to handle my lightwork, he sent Ad to install my chandelier
this seems too statemental. I dont like it bro
This topical queen, you think you'll get the upset maggot?
Here's a better plan, go back to writing 80 bars about a Sunset, faggot
lol well that was straight foward

Originally Posted by Adverse

You got a million ways to die, diabetes, heart disease, the list isn't short, b
Or I can do him execution style with the gat, only thing certain, you won't live to see .40
thats fire. wish u would of referenced a blindfold in the setup , it would of helped the visual. still hit. good line
Oh look another UPN head, Zuch is a beast but bruh you need to go back
It speaks to how weak your craft is that you can even be overshadowed with a physique like that
eh. its ok. not clever enough almost. ur basically just saying ur fat and have a big shadow. I mean its ok, but u used alot of syllables here to not say much. i feel like this line missed an element that could of took it over the top
How the fuck can you be that big of a dude and be so damn scrawny
No computer, when I'm "hacking User panels" it's with murderous intent screaming out "herrrreeee's Johnny!"
I like the concept, I feel the wording weighed it down here. try to be more concise in the future.
I'm stomping the head of this swollen swine, teach you how to put your frontal lobe behind
Recap: Acting bitch will get your shit Preston, then you dying like Travolta's wife
was her name preston travolta? thats kinda cool
Can you believe this guy posting a gun bar? This guy ain't gon' pop
Only 'chambers we wanna see u grip" is your heart's when it finally stops
nice. u hit the wording better here. this was smooth. this is what we need to see more of

user kinda threw his last 4 away. Verse could of took it if he had ONE big banger in there. but Use had his first 6 lines which were the strongest portion of this battle



v user.